Peer Evaluation

In class, we evaluated everyone's rough cuts for their opening scene.
From the feedback that we got, we realised there was a few things that we needed to change.
Such as:

·         Looks too much like a trailer.

      ·         change the voiceover to an adults voice.
      ·         Take out the interview.
       ·         Too fast at points.
      ·         Lighting in the bedroom is too dark.
      ·         More shots of the girl in the lake.

How were these fixed?

·         We took out the clips of the alta egos to make the sequence look more like an opening scene, by just focusing more on the main character.

·         The voiceover has been redone using an adults voice.

·         Interview was removed and replaced with scenery shots instead.

·         We ignored the comment on it being too fast, because we believed the pace was acceptable with the confused nature of the scene.

·         We re-filmed the bedroom shot with more lighting, in exactly the same concept.

·         We added a few extra snippets of the body in the lake shot towards the end of the scene.